Risks and challenges

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 							<h3>Risks and challenges</h3>
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 								Building a Dyson Sphere is like trying to wrap a birthday present around the Sun while wearing oven mitts in zero gravity. Sure, we'll face
-								"minor" obstacles like figuring out how to mine asteroids without accidentally sending one hurtling toward Earth, or developing materials that
-								won't instantly vaporize when placed near a thermonuclear furnace. But hey, our team is staffed with optimists who think "impossible" is just a
-								fancy word for "hasn't been attempted by people desperate enough." We've already ordered commemorative t-shirts that say "Either we'll harness
-								unlimited energy or create the galaxy's most expensive light show."
+								"minor" obstacles like figuring out how to mine asteroids without accidentally sending one toward Earth, or developing materials that won't
+								instantly vaporize when placed near a thermonuclear furnace. But hey, our team is filled with optimists who think "impossible" is just a fancy
+								word for "hasn't been attempted by people desperate enough." We've already ordered commemorative t-shirts that say "Welcome to the galaxy's most
+								expensive light show."
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-								The logistics might seem daunting (where do you even store the assembly instructions for a structure larger than Earth's orbit?), but we've got
-								solutions. Our engineers are working on self-replicating robots that will build the sphere for us, assuming they don't gain sentience and decide
-								to build themselves a beach house on Mercury instead. As for the minor issue of potentially dimming sunlight to Earth and altering our climate
-								forever – we've calculated that by the time anyone notices, we'll be too rich and powerful for it to matter! Rest assured, our contingency plans
-								have contingency plans, and those plans primarily involve blaming any catastrophes on rival megaprojects or solar flares.
+								The logistics may seem alarming, but we have solutions. Our engineers are working on self-replicating robots that will build the sphere for us,
+								unless they were to gain consciousness and decide to build a vacation house on Mars instead. As for the small matter of the possible decline in
+								sunlight on Earth and the permanent change in our climate, let's just hope that EDF won't raise their prices too much because of us.
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