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| //! adds to the list in whichever manner it likes, including on the stack! Elements can live on a | ||
| //! stack frame that lives shorter than the collection does provided the elements that live in a | ||
| //! given stack frame are removed from the list before going out of scope. | ||
| //! stack frame that lives shorter than the collection does, provided that the elements in that |
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nit: This is clearer than the original, maybe we can simplify it a bit further and make the "go out of scope" explicit. is this better?
Elements can be stored in a stack frame shorter-lived than the collection, provided they are removed from the list before that frame goes out of scope.
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Yes I like your version, simpler and more explicit. Doc updated.
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nit: it's better to squash into one commit.
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thanks for pointing that out! the commits are squashed
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Fix pin docs Split a long sentence to improve readability. The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.
Fix pin docs Split a long sentence to improve readability. The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.
Fix pin docs Split a long sentence to improve readability. The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.
Fix pin docs Split a long sentence to improve readability. The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.
…uwer Rollup of 22 pull requests Successful merges: - #150965 (Fix no results when searching for == in doc) - #153999 (Remove `TaggedQueryKey::def_kind`) - #154146 (Split out the creation of `Cycle` to a new `process_cycle` function) - #154147 (Do not attempt generating DllImport for extern types) - #154812 (Update Fira Mono License Information) - #154880 (bootstrap: minor improvements to download-rustc) - #154886 (Stabilize check-cfg suggestions for symbol) - #154889 (Update wasm-component-ld to 0.5.22) - #154928 (Fix pin docs) - #154942 (delegation: generate more verbose error delegation) - #153269 (GCI: During reachability analysis don't try to evaluate the initializer of overly generic free const items) - #154506 (Migrate some tests from `tests/ui/issues` to appropriate directories) - #154673 (Use a different name for fast try builds) - #154761 (coretests: add argument order regression tests for min_by/max_by/minmax_by) - #154795 (Add more info about where autodiff can be applied) - #154808 (Post-attribute ports cleanup pt. 1) - #154825 (constify `Step for NonZero<u*>`) - #154837 (library: std: motor: use OS' process::exit in abort_internal) - #154866 (add regression test for #146514) - #154922 (c-b: Export inverse hyperbolic trigonometric functions) - #154931 (delegation(small cleanup): remove not needed PhantomData) - #154950 (library: no `cfg(target_arch)` on scalable intrinsics)
Rollup merge of #154928 - guiyuanju:fix-pin-doc, r=chenyukang Fix pin docs Split a long sentence to improve readability. The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.
…uwer Rollup of 22 pull requests Successful merges: - rust-lang/rust#150965 (Fix no results when searching for == in doc) - rust-lang/rust#153999 (Remove `TaggedQueryKey::def_kind`) - rust-lang/rust#154146 (Split out the creation of `Cycle` to a new `process_cycle` function) - rust-lang/rust#154147 (Do not attempt generating DllImport for extern types) - rust-lang/rust#154812 (Update Fira Mono License Information) - rust-lang/rust#154880 (bootstrap: minor improvements to download-rustc) - rust-lang/rust#154886 (Stabilize check-cfg suggestions for symbol) - rust-lang/rust#154889 (Update wasm-component-ld to 0.5.22) - rust-lang/rust#154928 (Fix pin docs) - rust-lang/rust#154942 (delegation: generate more verbose error delegation) - rust-lang/rust#153269 (GCI: During reachability analysis don't try to evaluate the initializer of overly generic free const items) - rust-lang/rust#154506 (Migrate some tests from `tests/ui/issues` to appropriate directories) - rust-lang/rust#154673 (Use a different name for fast try builds) - rust-lang/rust#154761 (coretests: add argument order regression tests for min_by/max_by/minmax_by) - rust-lang/rust#154795 (Add more info about where autodiff can be applied) - rust-lang/rust#154808 (Post-attribute ports cleanup pt. 1) - rust-lang/rust#154825 (constify `Step for NonZero<u*>`) - rust-lang/rust#154837 (library: std: motor: use OS' process::exit in abort_internal) - rust-lang/rust#154866 (add regression test for rust-lang/rust#146514) - rust-lang/rust#154922 (c-b: Export inverse hyperbolic trigonometric functions) - rust-lang/rust#154931 (delegation(small cleanup): remove not needed PhantomData) - rust-lang/rust#154950 (library: no `cfg(target_arch)` on scalable intrinsics)
…uwer Rollup of 22 pull requests Successful merges: - rust-lang/rust#150965 (Fix no results when searching for == in doc) - rust-lang/rust#153999 (Remove `TaggedQueryKey::def_kind`) - rust-lang/rust#154146 (Split out the creation of `Cycle` to a new `process_cycle` function) - rust-lang/rust#154147 (Do not attempt generating DllImport for extern types) - rust-lang/rust#154812 (Update Fira Mono License Information) - rust-lang/rust#154880 (bootstrap: minor improvements to download-rustc) - rust-lang/rust#154886 (Stabilize check-cfg suggestions for symbol) - rust-lang/rust#154889 (Update wasm-component-ld to 0.5.22) - rust-lang/rust#154928 (Fix pin docs) - rust-lang/rust#154942 (delegation: generate more verbose error delegation) - rust-lang/rust#153269 (GCI: During reachability analysis don't try to evaluate the initializer of overly generic free const items) - rust-lang/rust#154506 (Migrate some tests from `tests/ui/issues` to appropriate directories) - rust-lang/rust#154673 (Use a different name for fast try builds) - rust-lang/rust#154761 (coretests: add argument order regression tests for min_by/max_by/minmax_by) - rust-lang/rust#154795 (Add more info about where autodiff can be applied) - rust-lang/rust#154808 (Post-attribute ports cleanup pt. 1) - rust-lang/rust#154825 (constify `Step for NonZero<u*>`) - rust-lang/rust#154837 (library: std: motor: use OS' process::exit in abort_internal) - rust-lang/rust#154866 (add regression test for rust-lang/rust#146514) - rust-lang/rust#154922 (c-b: Export inverse hyperbolic trigonometric functions) - rust-lang/rust#154931 (delegation(small cleanup): remove not needed PhantomData) - rust-lang/rust#154950 (library: no `cfg(target_arch)` on scalable intrinsics)
Split a long sentence to improve readability.
The original sentence required multiple readings for me to understand as a non-native speaker. The revised version is clearer and more readable, and likely easier for others as well.